My descriptive writing

 Her hair was like a beautiful rainbow sparkling in the sun. Her eyes were sparkling like water.Her face was smooth  like a baby's skin.She was tall as a young tree. She walked gracefully like a peacock with its tail spread. She was as beautiful as a waterfall.

Here is an example of my writing about Sina.

Eels in Stories

I have been working with Miss Green and reading lots of different texts about eels to see how the authors describe them. Here is what I found out.