Her hair was like a beautiful rainbow sparkling in the sun. Her eyes were sparkling like water.Her face was smooth like a baby's skin.She was tall as a young tree. She walked gracefully like a peacock with its tail spread. She was as beautiful as a waterfall.
Here is an example of my writing about Sina.
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Hi my name is Sophia and i am from room 24.
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Hi Quan I'm Rajveer from Rm 6,
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Hi Quan I really think you're good at describing people and you're good at writing. Kaynin.
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