Monday, 6 September 2021

 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Quan, nice job on your sentences, I really like the expression you used in your first sentence, "angry storm", a really cool image.

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  2. Hi Quan, my name is Amy from Rm 7.
    I like you 100 word story it is really good.
    was this fun to make?
    Bye blog you later!

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  3. Kia Ora Quan. I like your 6 different sentences. You have experimented with using other words for big and exploding. I really like the words humongous, thundering, angry storm and spitting out lava. These are great ways to describe a volcano erupting. Well done.

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